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3D Warrior Girl

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This last days i have been extremelly busy with university works but in my free time at night i have been training myself with some new programs of some things animation, 3D, etc... I hope i can show you soon all the things i have done for practicing, but well here you have some ot the work i have done for training on 3D programs.

Comments and Critiques are so so sooo welcomed
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is a lovely piece of art, nicely composed and well-lit. The character's pose suggests determination and power, but not in a way that detracts from her femininity. I also like the contrast between the soft, flowery undergarment she wears and her battered, well-worn armor. She wears both decorative jewels and a weapon at her side. She is both a woman and a warrior, as the title suggests.

If I were to suggest improvements, I would start by pointing out a small area of poke-through on the character's left collar, where the strap from her breastplate sticks out of the shoulder armor. (A minor adjustment to the shoulder armor would easily remedy this.) I also think the piece would be greatly enhanced by the use of ambient occlusion. I'm not sure what this was rendered in, but if it was done in Poser, I'd recommend adding AO nodes to the character's skin and to the clothing/jewels. (A max distance of around 7" with a bias of 0.4 would probably work well.) I have no idea if this is possible in DAZ Studio, but I'm pretty sure that DS does allow for ambient occlusion on lights. The same effect could be accomplished by adding AO to the main light in the scene (same settings as described above).

This is a really solid piece of artwork for a "practice render," as described in this work's caption. I recall MY early 3D renders... and they were not nearly this well-composed! Nice job!